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Computers have certainly had an enormous impact on us. They have significantly changed the way we communicate with each other because of the Internet and millions of people from all over the world think that it is the best invention throughout the history. However, computers have both advantages and disadvantages.

There are several negative aspects of computers, such as harmful influence on people's health, expensive cost of different services and its influence on children. The reason for this is that today, many children have computers, so there is plenty of opportunity for very young children to start using them. Secondly, computers сan cause different illnesses like insomnia.

However, on the other hand I believe that there are several obvious benefits from this invention, such as accessing to the Internet, an opportunity to keep in touch with people at any time and place. A clear example of this is that computers have a great variation of games, a function to take photos and videos and many other useful things.The final benefit of computers is that they are extremely convenient and easy to use.

In conclusion, I think although there are some drawbacks to computers, their efficiency makes them a great invention!

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