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Не мой текст:

I would like to tell you a horrible story. One night it seemed to me that there was someone besides me in my room. I opened my eyes and saw a woman's shade at the window. She was very tall, thin and she stretched out her arms to me. I was scared and I screamed so loud as I could. I was sitting on the bed and crying. Suddenly my parents ran into my room. Theу were very frightened. Dad turned on the light, and I stopped screaming. It turned out that in the afternoon, my mother brought a huge palm tree in a large pot from the hall into my room and she put it behind the curtains. That night there was full moon, and it seemed to me that it was a wonman ... I have never been so bad as that night ....

Мой текст:

I want to tell you a terrible story. As I walked from school, strange sounds were heard behind me. It seemed to me that someone was following me. When I turned back, no one was there. When I approached my house, someone touched my shoulder. I was very scared. When night fell, I saw a strange silhouette with red eyes in the window. I became very scared, I dared to go to the window, but before I could blink the silhouette in the window disappeared. I went back to my bed. I will never forget this awful day.